Tuesday, February 14, 2012

poetry session

Breakfast (Unspoken Word)


Over breakfast…
No sound was uttered
No word was said
Just an overwhelming feeling of

Pleasurable elation and
Sensual contentment
I,
In the morning light,
Was beamin
Feelin like
You were feelin it too
Coffee brewin
And the fusion of
Breakfast tastes and lewd menus had
Somehow mimicked our bodies
Brown sugar and honey
Milk, cream and cinnamon
Were mixed in with the scents
From our skin
Senses honed in
Erogenous in nature
Erotic enough to awaken
The memories of what just took place...

Last night
Rounds one, two, three, four and five…
We broke the tension and the strife 

Hence the smile upon my face
And the rouge above my grin
Body drenched with sweat and anticipation
For rounds six, seven,
Eight...nine…

And ten to begin
Your taste was mine
And still lingers on my lips...
Over breakfast
We sit
I take a sip of my beverage
And allow my tongue to savor
In your aftertaste
Breathing in flavors ecstasy-laced;
Waiting for exhalation
Eyes making love
While still holding conversation
Withholding nothing but
Our appetites and desires to quench
Sexual dehydration
Our early morning fixation
An exchange of pure exhilaration
Resulting in the most
Delectable taste sensation
While breaking bread
Over breakfast




-j.sanjuan





18 comments:

  1. What a way to start the day. This is delicious with a soft sensuality that pulls the reader closer. Ten would kill me but I'd die trying :) Wonderful work.

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    1. yes...ten is a rare feat, most definitely, LOL...but would welcome the opportunity any day...hahah...thanks for your comment :)

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  2. Such wonderful words inspire thoughts of 11, 12, ad infinitum. A beautiful soul shones thru the lovely expression of joy and joy of love. Sensuously and evocatively told.

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    1. thank you so much for your inspirational words...and yes, why not rounds 11, 12.............. heheh :)

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  3. what a way to wake up...i might even be able to give up coffee if that was the case....nice blooming in this....smiles.

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    1. Yes...my sentiments exactly, what a way to wake up...lol...
      well, giving up coffee may be a stretch (aside from chocolate...at least for me), but that's why I worked it in there a bit..heheh...thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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  4. so nice...Brown sugar and honey
    Milk, cream and cinnamon... hmmm...and the tender thoughts of what happened...beautiful..

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    1. thank you so much :)
      Well, taste and imagination are always a good thing!

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  5. I'm immediately horny and hungry!! Quite beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed that. keep up the good work...

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    1. hahahahah...you're crazy! Well, I'm glad to have inspired such impulses! LOL...thank you for your thoughtful words, love... ;)

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  6. Maaaaaaaaaaaaaan........... WOW! I LOVE THIS....

    Can't find any part of that poem to quote - I love the whole thing!

    WOW

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    1. hahaha...I appreciate the love! thank you so much for reading, your words mean a lot :)

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  7. Sometimes the morning after is every bit as good as the night before, especially when both players go the distance. I love the sense of anticipation and delight in the sexual tension and also the poem's most satisfying expressions of all five senses.

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    1. thank you so much! yes, the physical is no where near as pleasurable without the anticipation, tension and imagination of it all.... :)

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    1. hahahaha!! Indeed it is... :) thank you for reading and commenting!

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  9. Indeed - as Dark Angel put it - that was yummy ... ditto that and then some ...

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    1. LOL!!! I appreciate the honesty! Thank you for reading :)

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